Thanks for your continued active participation in our class. It really helps me as an instructor when you share your ideas and questions, and I’m sure it helps your peers as well.
Yes, it is a lot of work, but you’re doing a GREAT job so far. Your blogging homework shows much effort and critical thinking, and I’m excited to follow the progress of your paper. I would say that you’re definitely on track for an “A” right now.
Proposal: As we talked about in our meeting, I want you to have a specific angle when approaching your research on dance, a narrower focus as well as some kind of justification as to why the world needs this research – who can benefit? But I think you are on the right path for now and additional reading will likely help you find your focus.
If you haven’t already noticed, your blog work is direct preparation for critical reading and writing. In fact, you’ve already been researching for 3 weeks now and practicing skills that will support you when writing your paper.
Thanks for being an inquisitive and motivated student. I look forward to working with you throughout the rest of the semester.
Hi Jessica,
Thanks for your continued active participation in our class. It really helps me as an instructor when you share your ideas and questions, and I’m sure it helps your peers as well.
Yes, it is a lot of work, but you’re doing a GREAT job so far. Your blogging homework shows much effort and critical thinking, and I’m excited to follow the progress of your paper. I would say that you’re definitely on track for an “A” right now.
Proposal: As we talked about in our meeting, I want you to have a specific angle when approaching your research on dance, a narrower focus as well as some kind of justification as to why the world needs this research – who can benefit? But I think you are on the right path for now and additional reading will likely help you find your focus.
If you haven’t already noticed, your blog work is direct preparation for critical reading and writing. In fact, you’ve already been researching for 3 weeks now and practicing skills that will support you when writing your paper.
Thanks for being an inquisitive and motivated student. I look forward to working with you throughout the rest of the semester.
Marlen
By: marlen on September 22, 2009
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